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seven seven OH seven -
only rainclouds
in my nightsky
The Tanabata Star Festival passed behind clouds last night ... but the events are still going strong in Hiratsuka and other places.
Weddings where a big hit !
More is here
Tanabata, Star Festival
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some comments
tons of wedddings here in the US too, enjoyed the ku.
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good one
we always know the stars are there
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Hi Gabi,
Greetings from cloudy Nagoya.
I like this ku a lot, escpecially the use of numbers for the tanabata festival date, and the capitalized OH. It almost makes me think of dialing a phone number.
.hard to see the beloveds' stars in a cloudy night sky, eh? We just have to believe they're out there, this one night a year.
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oh, I missed this date during my hectic schedule, otherwise i would have celebrated it as i love numbers like these.
i guess this haiku will always need a footnote to make naive international readers like me aware that it does celebrate the Star Festival.
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Hi Gabi,
yes, there were several events here on that special day...supposed to be a lucky date!
Do you think this would also work with "star festival" as line 1?
(Since I see that it's on different dates.)
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I like this ku a lot, escpecially the use of numbers for the tanabata festival date, and the capitalized OH.
It almost makes me think of dialing a phone number.
a friend from Nagoya
We had clear sky at the beginning but rain soon after.
7-7-7... lucky for those with luck... haha.
Chibi
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excellent haiku reagrding this mystical date and memorable.
a teaching haiku people can learn from.
"robert wilson"
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/31256
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Thanks, my friends, for your comments.
GABI
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