10/23/2009

smiling neighbours

  
  







autumn walk -
my smiling neighbours
at the roadside




24 cosmos flowers







27 red on the fence





11 long flower fingers








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Cosmos Flowers KIGO



. . . Read my Haiku Archives 2009


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8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh whow, I wish I had some neighbours like that!
M.

anonymous said...

Nice to know someone writes consistantly good poems.
I saw people. I recognise the flowers can still be neighbors... tho only we see them smiling, neh?
Heian

Anonymous said...

Hi Gabi,
Going for a walk, meeting a neighbour, and then 'aha' ... guess who/what!
Lovely.
J.

Anonymous said...

Hi Gabi,
I think this is nice with the photo.
Without the photo it is a kind of creepy . . . coming up to Halloween, whay not ?
to

Anonymous said...

A lovely example of the way a haiga is more than the sum of a haiku and image.
Nicely done, Gabi.
S.

Anonymous said...

Lovely, Gabi, with and also, I think, without the image.
J.

anonymous said...

This is lovely Gabi
M. :o)

Anonymous said...

wonderfully layered haiku and perfect with the picture which all adds up to a stunning haiga!
akebono

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