 autumn walk - my smiling neighbours at the roadside    |
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8 comments:
Oh whow, I wish I had some neighbours like that!
M.
Nice to know someone writes consistantly good poems.
I saw people. I recognise the flowers can still be neighbors... tho only we see them smiling, neh?
Heian
Hi Gabi,
Going for a walk, meeting a neighbour, and then 'aha' ... guess who/what!
Lovely.
J.
Hi Gabi,
I think this is nice with the photo.
Without the photo it is a kind of creepy . . . coming up to Halloween, whay not ?
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A lovely example of the way a haiga is more than the sum of a haiku and image.
Nicely done, Gabi.
S.
Lovely, Gabi, with and also, I think, without the image.
J.
This is lovely Gabi
M. :o)
wonderfully layered haiku and perfect with the picture which all adds up to a stunning haiga!
akebono
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