 autumn sky - my haiku blown by the wind        ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: racing clouds over the rice paddies - autumn comes fast  |
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My Walk through the Rice Paddies of Ohaga
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18 comments:
Dear Gabi san,
What a humorous haiku....the blown haiku!
Caleb, Kenya
Camilla Sayf
good haiku, Gabi-san, thank you so much.
Melinda Hipple
Lovely, Gabi, both haiku and image. :)
Mary White
besautiful photo it would make a very atmospheric painting
FB
Gabi!!!
This is a materpiece!!!
All my admiration!
K.I.
Totally gorgeous, Gabi - and thanks for letting us take the skywalk with you. Your haiku is splendid!
W.
A masterwork, Gabi!
The rest is silence.....
heian
Fabulous!!!!
akebono
Hi Gabi,
I'm intrigued that the word 'haiku' can be used as an image, the poem itself flying across the sky. Definitely brilliant.
J.
Gabi,
This is masterful, as was the sky in that moment.....how truly magical!
W.
Terrific clouds . . . and a delightful haiku to go with it, Gabi!
S.
“6th Sailing”
Haiku about Nature . Discussion
http://thehaikufoundation.org/2009/10/20/6th-sailing/
Very nice!!!
M.R.
"Windy!! Everywhere!"
Dennis Chibi
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This one wowed me Gabi. If my Mother was there she would have said
"Close your mouth or you'll catch flies".
T.
Very, very clever Gabi! This is one is to be published!
ggg
Beautiful, Gabi. I'm fascinated by your use of 'haiku' here.
J.
a beautiful Haiku, Gabi.
B.
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