I whisper
to my ailing knees -
yoga in spring
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9 comments:
Maybe consider alternatives to "ailing?"
What do they feel like, for
instance?
B.NY.
Thanks for your thoughts, B.
I feel ailing, as in "getting old and more fragile"
... maybe painful would also do it ...
I give it some thought !
And will do my exercises tomorrow morning and ask my knee what it feels ... grin grin ...
I love this haiku, Gabi.
One of your best.
It has humor, determination, addresses aging, and so much more.
Outstanding!
RDW
I whisper to my knees all the time... well, pray for them, at least! LOL
I wonder if yoga helps or hurts them? One way to find out...
All kidding aside Gabi, I like this ku a lot.
D.
Brilliant, one of the best English language haiku I've read this year. An award winner for sure. .. and your form and meter are perfect.
R.
Very nice Gabi!
K.I.
Ditto!
BD.
your ku flows smoothly, anyway, Gabi. Nicely done!
L.A.
Prost!
B.
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