| light snow - the enhanced beauty of branch design |
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light snow --
the snowman gets
new skin!
Keep warm all you GakuRakuanians.
ciao... chibi
Gabi, did you see these
Very skilfully understated. I love it, Gabi!
N.
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you must forgive me ... ever learning ...
i dont get the imagery from lines 2 and 3 ... i mean i do get the statement ... but not the imagery ... love the idea though ... >>
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Hi Gabi
I think I get this one. The enhanced beauty is of the branch of a tree with just enough snow to make it beautiful.
Any way even if I am wrong I like it.
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this will want to make you throw away the color film and
use black & white.
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Hi Gabi,
two things: one was I guessed it was a tree, but which kind came to mind. secondly, "branch design" is like a cold word euphemistically architectural and not speaking to me of a living thing. it is a lovely idea.
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It works for me, Gabi.
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hi Gabi,
it sounds lovely...and an interesting use of
words which I wouldn't normally expect in a haiku!
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... and an interesting use of words which I wouldn't normally expect in a haiku!
Hi there,
this makes me smile again !
You should maybe have said ... American Haiku ?!
On my Japanese side of haiku, there are no limits or expectations to the words that can be used or not ... as long as they represent the real situation of my experience and express what I want to express !
light snow -
the enhanced beauty
of branch design
with kigo and cut marker to please my Japanese haiku soul ...
Gabi
I don't see any images when I open the site, but no matter ...
light snow
some new holes
in my old sweater
:>) Ella Wagemakers
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