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winter sunset -
another day closer
to the end
winter sunset -
we talk about all
the friends gone
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This is a sort of shasei. Many friends have passed away lately or are gravely ill.
Watching the splendid sunset fade into the cold, these kinds of thoughts came to mind naturally ..
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2/26/2007
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BIG ADVENTURE!
winter sunset -
another day closer
to the start
death is just
a change of environment
GABI - be glad..
"john"
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4201
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winter sunset:
somewhere
eyelids are closing for good
turning on a lamp,
the winter sunset goes on
glowing in the room...
Gabi,
Some days the day ends when darkness falls, and some days I turn on a lamp.
But I know how you feel...
Larry
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4205
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winter sunset-
the warmth
of remembered friends
winter sunset-
the treasure
of memories
Hi Gabi, hi Larry-indeed, as life goes on these sad losses add up. But then, I always remain grateful for (knowing) those lost.
I hope this adds a happy spin, to a sad subject.
Cheers, Michele
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4206
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winter sunset..
behind me
darkness
frozen moments..
dreams of tonight
soon melt into dawn
(as the earth turns)
-electraglide
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4207
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spring morning <>
so many friends sprouting
in my garden
Thank you all SO MUCH !
GABI
George Swede:
winter sunset:
my shadow seems too long
for one life
[Honorable Mention (International); 10th Mainichi Haiku Contest, 2006]
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4210
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scratching -
my skull outstaring
into space
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4211
Beautiful, lovely pieces...
winter sunset
awesome orange clouds
- sitting on the roof
winter sunset -
captivating view
for my life's autumn
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Thanks for your contributions, USPACE !
This year again we are on the step from autumn colors to winter white ... this morning, ground frost !
GABI
You are most welcome GABI, thank you!
...bitter
chills thaw into
spring perfume setting warm
summer stage for autumn's colors
warming our souls for another winter's
journey...
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