autumn dusk

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autumn dusk -
the shadows in my valley
deepen



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aki fukaki haijin wa nani o kaku hito zo

autumn deepens -
I wonder what my haiku friends
are writing right now

Gabi
.

aki fukaki tonari wa nani o suru hito zo
Basho


and about Basho, we know
http://wkdkigodatabase03.blogspot.com/2007/11/autumn-deepens-aki-fukashi.html



Basho lived in a place where the space to the neighbuor was just one thin wall and he could hear everything from next-door (next-wall, so to say). But beyond the thin wall, Basho could also hear the deepening autumn as his neighbour, so to day, in space.


autumn deepens
and I wonder,
what is my neighbour doing?

Tr. Gabi Greve, inspired by Hasegawa Kai

. aha .


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autumn dusk -
so many haiku
in the saijiki


. Autumn dusk (aki no kure) 　


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Friends are trying to understand
allusion, honkadori, parody, plagiat . . .

. Honkadori, the art of quoting haiku


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. . . Read my Haiku Archives 2010

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