a love letter folded in two
wings of a butterfly
a love letter
folded in two wings
of a butterfly
inspired from here:
二つ折りの恋文が、花の番地を探している
ルナール (Jules Renard (1864-1910)
http://y-field.com/butterfly.html
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about BUTTERFLY haiku
The Haiku Foundation . Viral 7.1
WKD : BUTTERFLY ... a KIGO
. kesoobumi 懸想文 Kesobumi - love letter in Edo .
A butterfly is a love letter,
folded in two,
looking for a flower's address.
Jules Renard (1864-1910)
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12 comments:
"beautiful haiku,Gabi!"
Olga Neagu
FB
"Just beautiful."
Mark Snyder
FB
I have always admired butterfly's, and these Haiku are beautiful
woodland path
butterfly love
kiss on my cheek
Roy Lindquist
FB
I prefer the two-liner, Gabi. A nicer metre, I think. Can't help but play with this one, though:
a love letter
folded in two . . .
butterfly
S.
Yes, Gabi san,
The two-line version has its own kind of magic.
neko
lovely gentle touch.
Thanks for sharing.
tco
I love the image that you have given me.
J.
Very sweet Gabi-
I, too, like the two line version.
JC
HI Gabi - I also prefer the two-liner. Your call on a very nice poem.
W.
Beautiful Gabi
I also prefer the 2 liner.
M.
So sweet and delicate!
--Vicky Lynn :o)
mandala oasis
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