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evening rain
...................... and now
morning rain
Inspired by
. . . . . Zen Poerty
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RAIN in various kigo
. . . Read my Haiku Archives 2009
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5/22/2009
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3 comments:
ah the constant rain...sparse and clear...so enjoyed!
D.
morning rain, afternoon rain, evening rain, night rain...any old rain at all is becoming a distant memory here in Australia ...
I like this very much, Gabi. The line of dots is very effective.
I like the order in which you have presented this. I'd probably have begun, 'morning rain'. What you have done is far better.
Ending the haiku with a second coming of the rain. It really makes the wet days seem endless.
J.
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