2/24/2009

first plum blossom

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first plum blossom -
I try to write haiku
without any fuss



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The idea and the last line in inspried from a friend.

So this is a lesson,
trying to write simple haiku without overt personification or more than one kigo and and and ...



Why argue about the use of language?
This is the approach eventually taken by Humpty Dumpty in "Alice in Wonderland"

all words mean
what one chooses them to mean ...
neither more nor less





. . . Read my Haiku Archives 2009


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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

bleak harvest
the rain fails to visit
the rice field

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