| aki fukashi 秋深し  autumn deepens - my spider still weaves sunbeams  |
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I have been observing HIM for quite a few weeks now, hanging in mid-air down from the roof. It must be a HIM, withstanding some rather strong gales and the first frost this morning ...
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How lovely !
Thanks, Gabi san !
Thank you very much Gabi san
I will enjoy Japanese deep Autumn too
Have a wonderful haiku days
bow from Etsuko
It is cold wind today, first Kogarashi came yesterday
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so beautiful Gabi :)
Autumn deepens
has been the beginning of many poems for me but this one is exquisite
b.
We saw few of these spiders earlier this year here. I think the draught has cut the mosquito and insect population down, so, the food source for spiders diminish and thus the spider population too.
the web
collects and connects --
autumn's lull
CHIBI
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This is such a beautiful haiku, Gabi san -- both in visual image, and in wording. One of the best spider haiku I've ever read :)
In my rock garden, spiders began hiding between rocks since the cold days coming...
autumn deepens ...
a spider web in the hole
between two rocks
Hi Gabi. Nice garden spider.
A real fisherman (fisherwoman).
autumn's end...
in the spider's web
wayward leaves
Michele
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deepening autumn
my neighbour
silence
sｺ17
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This says so much. Thank you for sharing it.
Ella
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Beautiful, Gabi!
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Lovely haiku and stunning photo., Gabi.
So it's an orb weaver of some kind. I think it's a 'she'. Those old woman spiders have taught us humans a thing or two.
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Hello, Gabi,
Yes, a stunning photo. I love seeing spider webs glistening in the sun.
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Beautiful haiku, Gabi. While the photo is lovely, the haiku stands very well on its own.
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lovely haiku gabi
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This one's a joy, Gabi.
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Hi Gabi,
I love the haiku and photo. Everyone is cocooning and nesting to stay warm these days, and this image of airiness and light makes me feel warm!
This haiku has such a hopeful feeling for me.
Best, from Nagoya !
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Thanks my friend and stay warm !
GABI
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