| burning incense - the different smell of the last puff  show me the secret of your smell - last puff of incense |
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Incense, a topic for haiku !
Before you start worrying, the above poem is not a haiku (no kigo) and not a senryu (no irony or humour).
It is simply a zappai 雑俳 in my Japanese classification sceme.
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Incense, a topic for haiku ??? A discussion begins ...
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TWILGHT
burning leaves
pictures of flames
hang in the trees
s17
http://www.jigzone.com/puzzles/0F055D4EABB3
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/31711
incense ash --
a geiko's pancake smears
her old red kimono
(zappydeedooda)
chibi
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/31713
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