autumn sunset

watching the sunset my long shadow grows lo o o o o oonger

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long, nagai 長

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some comments

GABI,

This haiku surprises me!
I thought you never deviate from a three line haiku?!!!
Good one!

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very interesting how you wrote the word longer!

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I like your sense of humour Gabi!
Works for me, and I usually don't care for concrete poetry. ( I think that's what it's called when you design with text) But this is easy to read and brings a smile... How long is this haiku 'moment'

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Reiterating: all haiku are haiku.

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Oh, this is delightful, Gabi... I love it!


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Effectively your visual disposition of the adjective "long" really fits the kanji transcription !

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