4/11/2007

Last Day of Spring

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last day of spring -
holding hands with
my sick cat



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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love "holding hands," Gabi--
a hint of personification that is fully motivated by the situation, as anyone who has had a pet will attest.

Best, Bill K

Unknown said...

This is melancholy spring.
春の憂いでしょうね。
何ともいえない良い句だと思います。

作雄

Anonymous said...

Beautiful haiku, and a memorable one! Sorry to hear that your cat is sick, Gabi san. I hope she gets well soon!

bright summer morning --
my old lady cat narrows
long ago blind eyes

:)

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