10/17/2007

Withered branches

Lesson about the CUT, cause and effect


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枯れ枝や 朝日に光る白い苔
kareeda ya asahi ni hikaru shiroi koke



withered branches -
their white moss sparkles
in the morning sun




朝の日や枯れ枝に光る白い苔
asa no hi ya kareeda ni hikaru shiroi koke

morning sunshine -
white moss sparkles
on withered branches





NO CUTTING WORD ... NO Japanese Equivalent
just for the sake of this exercise, using an inversion of line 2 and 3 which I do not favour in my haiku.


morning sunshine
on withered branches
the white moss sparkles


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We had long planned to cut this old three, whith its few bare branches sticking into the sky. But this morning, I decided to let him stand there as long as he was given time by nature ...



........................... a bit of Haiku theory

According to Hasegawa Kai sensei, the working of the cut is to bring out the relation between cause and effect. Cause is the happening NOW. Effect (something lingering in my mind plus CUT ) pops up.
BUT
in a good haiku, say what is still remaining in your heart first (with a CUTTING word). Meaning, the result, the effect is stated first, then the cause, the reason for what triggered this now.


I saw the white sparkle first, then the sunshine came into mind.

The third example has no Japanese equivalent.
The English reader might read a pause after line one or two, or maybe pivot ... theories are many.


Still struggeling with the CUT.
The lesson is going on till April of 2009, so there will be more theory !

Kireji, the CUT in haiku !




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Matz Bee

  
  



a stuffed pond -
no space for the frog
to jump in



by Matz Bee






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unkai

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雲海や一瞬だけの色使い


a second of pinky orange -
the sky above my
sea of clouds



just a second
of pink and orange -
this seas of clouds




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10/15/2007

Philosophy

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The self is not something that one finds.
It is something that one creates.


-- Thomas Szasz (1920-)
American Psychiatrist


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for haiku, it is often the other way round for me:

A haiku is not something that one creates.
It is something that one finds.


How about your haiku creation process ?

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Dear Gabi San,
Thanks you much for your continuous help to create.

With due honour to the American psychiatrist I may say that according Indian philosophy, our belief, the divine like the tao is already present in us and outside us. We have to contact it to find ourselves. A way of thinking it may be, as the modernist may say. but it is like is-ness, am-ness.

Now the next about Haiku as you invite, I have just penned these three lines-

Everything is there;
you have to put them in the
right place to create.

Warmly-
© Aju Mukhopadhyay, India, 2007


MORE
..... Philosophical Haiku ... from India



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autumn sunshine -
I find the right spot
to sit down




Nice Gabi San, yours too.
I have kept a copy of it- haiku out of philosophic discussion.
Warmly,
Aju Mukhopadhyay

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More thoughts on philosophical haiku as opposed to pure shasei haiku

After doing a little cursory research, it seems that the term 'philosophical', when applied to haiku, is a catch-all term for haiku which: have for subject matter an idea or concept; draw a moral; present or hint at a religious belief system; incorporate metaphysical elements; etc.

Larry Bole has more HERE !

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10/13/2007

earthworm

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nothing new -
a listless earthworm
in slow motion








ミミズ鳴く 日々の暮らしもさりげなく




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Dear Gabi San,
Seeing your earthworm just now, I have just penned a haiku for you to add another flavour.


If we do our work
silently like an earthworm
the earth will be blessed.



© Aju Mukhopadhyay, India, 2007


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EARTHWORM, mimizu ミミズ 蚯蚓 みみず
ミミズ鳴く, mimizu naku, a kigo



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10/10/2007

ten takashi

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high autumn sky -
a late mosquito
at my feet



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Clear Autumn Sky (ten takashi, Japan)
... high autumn sky, spacious sky


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10/09/2007

sleepless night

  
  








autumn downpoor -
the new roof drums
a new melody











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More haiku about my
ROOF !




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10/08/2007

aki matsuri

  
  



秋祭り



autumn festival -
a streak of sunshine
on the priest



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Considering most of the day was rainy, the priest picked the right moment to read his prayers.



Autumn Festival (aki matsuri, Japan)



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10/06/2007

First Snow

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初雪のお知らせありて 冨士の山




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first snow
late on Mount Fuji ...
says the news





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It is 5 days later than a "normal" year and 1 day earlier than last season.


First Snow ... a KIGO


Fuji, Mt. Fuji, Fujiyama, Fujisan and haiku





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nadeshiko

  
  



撫子や nadeshiko ya








wild carnation -
the fragile features of
this old courtesan





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歌麿の幻の肉筆画「女達磨図」
喜多川歌麿(1753~1806年)
They found the original of this old courtesan/Daruma
painting by Kitagawa Utamaro !!



Oiran to Daruma 花魁と達磨 
Daruma and the Courtesans (geisha)



Carnation, Nelke ... Wild Carnation (nadeshiko)




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Badgers Narrow Road

  
  



獣道  kemonomichi








autumn of the badgers ...
their narrow road
to the deep forest











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Basho / Oku no Hosomichi ... 2007



kemonomichi, the footpath of wild animals in our area ... this year, the badgers crossed the road from the forest to the field below, and left their dirty footprints all over the asphalt too after a night of rain.




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sun rays

  
  





sunrays cutting
through the morning mist -
spiders over graves





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sunrays cutting
through the morning mist -
no place for JUX





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JUX, or JUXT, an abbreviation often used for juxtaposition, an ingredient for haiku, especially loved by my American friends ...

For my German ear, JUX is something else .. or maybe not ? ??



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10/05/2007

visitors

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Ryokan sweeping fallen leaves



waiting for guests ...
I sweep the path again

and again







. Ryokan san and Tamashima Daruma  


. Ryokan Memorial Day  



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Sweeping the mental path, polishing the dustless mirror ... the daily zen activities ...


And with the autumn leaves now falling, sweeping is a real activity. Checking for the most beautiful to entertain the visitors, sweeping, bowing down, looking at autumn colors, sweeping a bit more.

When all is clean, turn around, just to see another leaf fallen on the path ...


Ryokan with his broom ... my good friend ! Click on the little photo above.




sweeping the leaves
with a broom like old Jittoku -
again and again


Fallen Leaves and Jittoku


Kanzan and Jittoku 寒山拾得

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Zen Patriarch Xiangyen Zhixian experiences enlightenment while sweeping

Kanō Motonobu 狩野元信 Kano Motonobu (1476–1559)
kyoogen kyakuchiku 香巌撃竹

Kyōgen Chikan 香嚴智閑
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. . hatsubooki 初箒(はつぼうき)first (use of the) broom .
hakizome 掃初 (はきぞめ) first cleaning
... fukihajime 拭始(ふきはじめ)beginning to clean
... hatsusooji 初掃除(はつそうじ)
kigo for the New Year


. WKD - Ryokan Memorial Day .  

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. hooki 箒 / ほうき Hoki, broom, Besen .
hookishi 箒師 making brooms in Edo
hookiya 箒屋 vendor of brooms

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Daishizen

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Nature is great 大自然 daishizen


Amida Buddha



namu amida
sunshine is my friend
drought is my friend


nature is great
rain is my friend
typhoon is my friend


namu amida
life is my friend
death is my friend








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10/04/2007

Higanbana

  
  








higanbana -
finally you show
your beautiful face




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HIGANBANA
flowers for the autumn equinox

this year they are more than two weeks later than usual. The ricefields, where they present a beautiful red frame to the yellow fields, are already cut and brown.



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Spider Lilies, cluster amaryllis (higanbana, manjushage) KIGO



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