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cloudy ---
just one spotlight
on the bamboo grove
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But
you might ask, is CLOUDY a kigo?
Well, cloudy just like that is not a kigo, neither is bamboo.
So in my Japanese haiku mind this poem is a ZAPPAI.
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SPOTLIGHT, a topic for haiku
early winter morning -
some unexpected spots
sparkle in sunrays
early winter morning -
a heavenly spotlight
brightens the valley
Greetings from a super morning in Japan, pink clouds over the valley, the low sunrays fingering around, finding spot after spot . . .
Gabi Greve, November 2006
Happy Haiku Forum
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1/06/2009
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2 comments:
Another winner, Gabi-san.
R.W.
Hi Gabi,
I like this natural "misenscene"!
T.
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