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10/23/2009

smiling neighbours

　　
　　







autumn walk -
my smiling neighbours
at the roadside



24 cosmos flowers







27 red on the fence





11 long flower fingers








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Cosmos Flowers KIGO



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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 October, 2009

    Oh whow, I wish I had some neighbours like that!
    M.

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  2. anonymous24 October, 2009

    Nice to know someone writes consistantly good poems.
    I saw people. I recognise the flowers can still be neighbors... tho only we see them smiling, neh?
    Heian

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  3. Anonymous24 October, 2009

    Hi Gabi,
    Going for a walk, meeting a neighbour, and then 'aha' ... guess who/what!
    Lovely.
    J.

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  4. Anonymous24 October, 2009

    Hi Gabi,
    I think this is nice with the photo.
    Without the photo it is a kind of creepy . . . coming up to Halloween, whay not ?
    to

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  5. Anonymous24 October, 2009

    A lovely example of the way a haiga is more than the sum of a haiku and image.
    Nicely done, Gabi.
    S.

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  6. Anonymous26 October, 2009

    Lovely, Gabi, with and also, I think, without the image.
    J.

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  7. anonymous26 October, 2009

    This is lovely Gabi
    M. :o)

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  8. Anonymous27 October, 2009

    wonderfully layered haiku and perfect with the picture which all adds up to a stunning haiga!
    akebono

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