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moonlight reflected
on the camellia leaves -
and silence
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It's nice to feel this moonlit quietude.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing!
Tom
love this seren image.
ReplyDeletewould it be too rude for me to say that the word "and" in this verse brings the whole mood down just a notch for me personally.
very small minor point.
i wouldn't want to suggest any particular change.
I. WHC
hunting demons -
ReplyDeletefull moon
at its peak
;)
Camilla.