tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192890093984872273.post8765827599183144773..comments2023-03-15T14:04:14.114+09:00Comments on ! Haiku and Happiness ! (02): Magnolia budsGabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192890093984872273.post-41031472262500525462009-04-26T06:59:00.000+09:002009-04-26T06:59:00.000+09:00Love it, Gabi. Those magnolias bloom here in late ...Love it, Gabi. Those magnolias bloom here in late Winter in australia.<br />Very nice, subtle showing of the direction of the unmentioned breeze, since 'before' is ambiguous here, showing relative time just as likely as it the magnolia buds' position in relation to the bamboo.<br />...so 'just that' involves more than 'just that' <br />L.anonymoushttp://haikuhut.com/haikuhutforum/index.php?topic=975.0noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192890093984872273.post-57540633999695387552009-04-21T11:16:00.000+09:002009-04-21T11:16:00.000+09:00What a great last line.
sway ... It links more efe...What a great last line.<br />sway ... It links more efectively with "just that," at least to my ear.<br />B.NY.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192890093984872273.post-67826793454699822022009-04-21T11:15:00.000+09:002009-04-21T11:15:00.000+09:00"sway" is puuuuurfect, Gabi-san. What an ending!
..."sway" is puuuuurfect, Gabi-san. What an ending!<br />R.anonymous hhhttp://haikuhut.com/haikuhutforum/index.php?topic=975.new%3Btopicseen#newnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192890093984872273.post-36099499540821991782009-04-18T16:47:00.000+09:002009-04-18T16:47:00.000+09:00Lovely blossoms, Gabi.
The magnolia blooms in my ...Lovely blossoms, Gabi. <br />The magnolia blooms in my yard are white. <br />Thanks for sharing.<br />J.anonymoushttp://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/23493noreply@blogger.com