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evening rain
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morning rain
Inspired by
. . . . . Zen Poerty
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RAIN in various kigo
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ah the constant rain...sparse and clear...so enjoyed!
ReplyDeleteD.
morning rain, afternoon rain, evening rain, night rain...any old rain at all is becoming a distant memory here in Australia ...
ReplyDeleteI like this very much, Gabi. The line of dots is very effective.
ReplyDeleteI like the order in which you have presented this. I'd probably have begun, 'morning rain'. What you have done is far better.
Ending the haiku with a second coming of the rain. It really makes the wet days seem endless.
J.