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late snow -
a pheasant calls
in the morning mist
late snow -
tiny icicles lace
the old roof
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Hi Gabby,
ReplyDeleteI know what you mean (and I really like these),
but I find "late snow" not quite specific enough for me...
did it come late in the day?
I'm pretty sure you mean near
winter's end... but for me anyway, it comes off being a little
unclear.
Love the images, though!
D.
Two little beauties.
ReplyDeleteFor me, the primary meaning of "late snow" is seasonal.
Referring to a time of day, I'd say "evening snow," "snow at twilight," and the like.
B.N.Y.
Other than multi-mix kigos... BEAUTIFUL!!
ReplyDeleteThis morning, we have no snow and the weather is turning warmer... the sounds of spring increase with the sunrise!
mockingbird --
I know that pine tree
is ALL YOURS!
C.
Ohayougozaimasu
ReplyDeletegood morning Gabi san
it is same snow
brrrrrrrrrrrrr
cold morning
I have to becareful to wake on street never break bones
e. Tokyo