wanderlust ...
a small snail
on the fresh green moss
shorten it to
wanderlust ...
a small snail
on fresh moss
..... wanderlust ..... snail ..... moss .....
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The rainy season brings out the best in the moss ... and the little snails ...
Snail (katatsumuri, katatsuburi)Japan, worldwide
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the empty shell
at the slime-trail's end --
a statue of Buddha
ciao... chibi
schoen, deine wanderlust *grin*
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This haiku, in my understanding, fits us all.
Magyar
http://wonderhaikuworlds.com/posts/view/5348
Does "small snail" mean smaller than the average snail, or does it simply point out that, in the great scheme of things, snails tend to be small?
B.
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> this one was really small, maybe just 1 cm for the little shell.
Usually our snails have a house of about 4 cm or larger ..
maybe she was just a baby still ?
We als have small and big ants, from 1 mm to almost 2 cm long ones ...
even in the world of small things, there are great differences when
one observes them every day
Gabi
Hi Gabi,
I like this surprise after "wanderlust...
and relativity between so called "macro -" and "micro - world" around us.
Thanks for sharing...
T.
Oh, I like this very much, Gabi!
I can see the snail or you taking
up wandering...
L.C.
i look forward to reading of your wanderings ! enjoy ! >>>
G.A.
wandering in Japan
i look forward to your haiku, Gabi!
A.D.
A wonderful wanderlust ku, Gabi san--nice revision too!
M.R.
hehe This is lovely, Gabi. It makes me smile and also want to travel with the snail.
ME.
A beautiful haiku,Gabi!
Keith A. Simmonds
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