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last day of spring -
holding hands with
my sick cat
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I love "holding hands," Gabi--
ReplyDeletea hint of personification that is fully motivated by the situation, as anyone who has had a pet will attest.
Best, Bill K
This is melancholy spring.
ReplyDelete春の憂いでしょうね。
何ともいえない良い句だと思います。
作雄
Beautiful haiku, and a memorable one! Sorry to hear that your cat is sick, Gabi san. I hope she gets well soon!
ReplyDeletebright summer morning --
my old lady cat narrows
long ago blind eyes
:)